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Re: A Dark Eyed Girl
I thought it was great, but I'm not sure about the way you change your tenses, eg "leaned" and "drift" are in contrast, which I think makes it read a ...
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
It's funny how my words All become so skewed When they earn refuge In your lost treasure casket At last.
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: English Garden
I love it, but I'd use a capital M for Michaelangelo! Your imagery is amazing, and the enjambment helped it flow which I think helped create the peaceful nature of ...
Jun 3, 2007